MichaWT

First of all the year is 289AC the crown only got in debt years after, on top of that search up an arming sword don’t see why it’s dumb idea especially when he can use funds from selling the other to fund his other business/projects or any other reforms he might want to implement.

1. Speak like a reincarnated person, how would they speak like really(what’s he going to say to lord Stannis stop yapping) 2.Super short chapters all chapter are above 500 words generally around 1-2k 3.Cheats/Bonus should not be an expected given if you reincarnate 4. A big block of word, if you going to criticise be precise, what could I of change for it to flow very or make sense. So In conclusion it feels like you didn’t even bother to actually put effort within your review and going by you stories on your page, it seem you want an op giga chad that steam rolls everyone while collecting a harem.

It’s shit yet your on chapter nine, also don’t read it or purchase it if it came to that.

As in depending on the feed back, would people be interested in the concept.

Complete Original

Realised that hope you enjoy the many chapter to come.

I appreciate the constructive criticism, Will look to improve that whithin the chapter releasing today.