livingforthetea

BTW, please tell me if he actually starts to embrace his "ghost-hood" in the future chapters, I really like the concept of a ghost, mc.

Grammar mistakes are seldom and could be ignored since they don't really affect comprehension. Personally, I do not think that the horror tag was justified in the novel. The "fears" of the characters were induced more so by the mc's powers rather than because of the writing itself. I think it really lacks the atmosphere that a horror novel should have. I was also disappointed when the mc turned human because the exact reason I read was because of the tag NON-HUMAN and Ghost mc. Is the mc still non-human when he has the soul of a human and uses a skill to turn human? "A human with a ghost/horror system" is an appropriate description here. IDK if this will change in the future chapters, please do tell me. Anyhow, it's a personal preference, so it doesn't matter, I guess? It's not my cup of tea, but it's ok.

There are lots of plot holes, and I almost can't understand the story. The protagonist has that frustrating naiveté that I hate to see in any character.

It's mid at best. If you are someone who read between the lines, you'll notice lots of plot holes. I personally don't like how the personality of the mc undergoes a HUGE CHANGE just from a few chapters. There is just not enough building for it to make sense (to me, at least). Overall, it's ok. If you can ignore certain questionable moments.

Srly? He saw armor and spears yet decided to shout for a lawyer? This guy deserves to get skewered fr fr.

It doesn't feel like a novel. It's like you're talking to your chaotic friend who recounts his day."I eat this for breakfastafter that, I brush my teethI go to schoolI stop a bully and make left a cringe worthy remark only an absolute weeb can sayI go to classI think about the worldI listen to lectures. "The novel literally goes like that, with no description of the surroundings, feelings, random timeskip, etc. Great idea, terrible, terrible execution.

I would give this one, 3 is me being merciful and positive. TBH, it was good until the author decided to remove mc's brain and fill it with garbage.

Imagine being a gangster all your life, mc died and gets reincarted, then suddenly, he lost all his gangster cautioness and intelligence??!! Really? that happens?? How tf are you dumbing down a supposedly smart and awesome gangster just for the plot to progress. It is extremely frustrating watching mc do all sorts of stupid things after boasting about his so-called "Fear-gangster-Lastlife."