never knew i would be entering WEBTOONS for a different story other than Conflict and DkA though, this is actually good, even better writing than Most Popular light novels, well detailed well entailed too, i like it. Nice one. Keep it up

Ohh, i see now, so This BWOA Novel has different Writers working together to create a Cosmology or something 🤔, because i remember reading about the Overworlds in the other COTU novel,... I see so the stories all connect🤔, it makes sense, keep it up🔥🔥🔥

You have impressed from the start of a once upon a time narrative to this place,... You've done good, i like the point actually thought it'll end up as a story of kid's adventure, most of those stories are boring. Now i understand why it's a fantasy novel,

Well, I'm not really a fan of mystery stories tho, but i love the idea of the ominous black and white desert, it's a cool idea, i see your novel has bracket making it a side story (i presume) keep up the Good work. You've got potential.

Well, based on how the story is going i believe it's Good tho, Not planning on giving it bad reviews or anything..... I like how the story mainly portrays Love and Death for love, well i believe that's the purpose of the story, I love how your stories go and i would've loved to see you make a happy ending but i guess that's not in this story... Well the story is good, and overall 4/5 for me♣️🖤