Dany_K_9260

Probably too embarrassed to say anything

Started off decent. Had a lil bit too close of a semblance to shadow slave but eh. Went down hill when author started padding chapter with fancy words and dragging things for chapters. MC showed no, to negative development of growth. Keeps saying he’ll try and author claims he’s trying to make mc realistic -_- maybe to you bud but some of us do what we say, especially if you consider MC is a reincarnator and should be mentally mature(cuz he was an adult in a modern world vs the new world) he shouldn’t need 150+ chapters just to get off his sorry butt. I tried, I really did. Authors writing isn’t horrible I just think when he tries putting his thoughts to pen, it doesn’t come out right or sum. Maybe write a less brain intensive novel like Blood Warlock, that did good for a while without all that extra jargon and ultra realistic behaviors

Better writer than a lot of people on here but ruins it by making MC a simp. . . Spoiler: MC and host both had bad childhood and an event that involves his fiance makes him a slave. For whatever reason both the host and mc WANT to regain that woman’s love. (System gives missions partly based on wants and needs i think) Just not my thing. Rated high for authors ability, but to have a badass name, system and be in this genre yet have the mc and a fmc relationship center around something like this and in the early chapters made reading feel like a waste of time but better than finding out 100 ch in too so 🤷‍♂️. Read if you like mcs like that and possible GENDERBENDER things as ‘punishment’ from what i saw the author comment somewhere.

Pathetic MC written by a confused author. Don’t waste time reading, MC has bad first life *womp womp* makes a whole speech just to off himself while crying and now all of a sudden in a game and has ‘fun’. Wack!!

Misleading title and wack author. Dont waste time

Futa/genderbender read at own discretion since author didn’t want to say it in the synopsis 👎

Writing is good and not many mistakes that make it hard to follow, only long paragraphs and small misspellings. Only thing I’d say is a major negative is how dragged the story is- almost 100 chapters just to get to the meeting talked about at the start which was like less than a week away at that point. Makes the story feel stationary.

Feels like a 3rd rate author writing about another 3rd rate author. No real mystery just a confusing tale of a guy brought over to his own novel but doesn’t know sh*t. I’d understand if it was a old novel but he was literally writing about it become the crossover. Also MC is indecisive, one line he’s talking about not caring about going back and a few lines later he wants to go back. Only mystery is the FML but that just feels forced idk if she lived through the novel and came back but still doesn’t explain her knowledge and the MCs lack of basic survival instincts. Not the worst novel but pretty ehh. Might come back to see how author explains why he transmig/ how FML knows about him from his OG world.

Thought the MC would transmig w/ family but the eldrich touch is nice. But a few things I cannot get past is the loss of braincells trying to understand the beginning as the author does nothing to make it make sense and leaves readers at a loss trying to understand. System or status takes up so much space but ok small complaint. Where i had to drop was making the chapter excessively long by describing characters like they’re fukin art masterpieces- I don’t need an essay to know how his family looks. Last but not least- his whore sister. First chapter she’s complaining the MC (before transmig) walking in on her getting screwed by 5 guys, and the failed posioning on him. And what happens later… you guessed it, she’s in the harem. Can’t you just stick with the nice maid or something. Is it really necessary to do all the world building and plotting to have him screw his sister that he literally said ‘is for the streets’? Anyways novels isn’t bad by WebNovel standards just disappointing and at times confusing.

Author deletes bad reviews but heck, it’s a niche novel. Like really niche. Author mixes story with poetry which isn’t bad but with how much he does it and tries using it as a form of comedy brings story down. Also visually looking at all the emojis added to the novel makes it feel like I’m looking at a long string of texts rather than a novel-lame. Don’t get me started on how the plot constantly revolves around MC being screwed over just to drag it out and repeat the next chapter. It’s not horrible like the shitty WN out there just not well executed and appealing or like i said for a very niche group.