The story has good drama and dialogues. The synopsis alone has so much going on and the chapters make it even better. Author does a good job to engage the readers through the character's pov. Keep up the good work, author!

The story is good but the grammatical errors might confuse the reader and affect their engagement. I suggest to use 'grammarly'. Its chrome extension will be of a lot of help when uploading the chapters.

*irritably - it's better suited adverb *fixed - to match with the tense used in 'yelled'

*gritted

*Who's there grammatical error

*leap singular verb with first person

*know

you got the name of the book wrong.

I would be lying if I said this book didn't give me creeps. I gives me anxiety... author did a great job to keep the readers engaged and hope that Anna stays alright even though she goes around poking things n people. I m like, gurl... be less curious . Good Job author, just pay a bit more attention to punctuation.

Thank god! grandma was around.

gurl... don't

Ideal sibling behavior 😆

Hello there

The novel sets the mood from the get go. True to the genre, the writing style is smooth. Given the choice of words it will benefit more from shorter paras.

The writing is smooth. Sets the mood but the paras seem too long to read. Breaking it in shorter paras might increase the readability

Because it's a character driven story n romance. The focus is on the character rather than the world. you'll understand if you read more chapters

it ain't the genre I usually read in. but I m liking it so far. I was sad about the plasma gun too

what's elemental affinity ?

I don't see why not. No one's stopping her.