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Still trying to figure out why:1. People pay real money to read novels here2. Everyone is more concerned about content than grammar and repeated sentences, paragraphs, chapters ect.
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THCCULTIVATOR5dRespondeu a KangGalon- THCCULTIVATOR6dRespondeu a KangGalon
Ok let me start out by saying I love the story and the gramical errors are minimal.... that said I'm so mad right now let me explain I just started Chapter 70 and had to stop reading to pick my wife up from the airport when I returned home after midnight I went to pick up where I left off and wouldn't you know the chapters are now locked[img=Your move] previous and the current one I was reading SMH
- THCCULTIVATOR8dComentou
brackets
Este número foi suprimido. - THCCULTIVATOR8dRespondeu a I_Cook_Limitlessly
I think there's some confusion the sentence says "bracelets" not "brackets" and for some reason it wouldn't let me comment on the actual sentence so I did the one above it
'Alright! Time to imagine and cook.' - THCCULTIVATOR13dComentou
get or grow doesn't matter which one but only one is needed
It was a truly terrifying sight. All I could do was stare at the creature in awe and excitement. Finally, I get another real battle. I always get grow significantly stronger when I face a foe superior to myself. - THCCULTIVATOR23dRespondeu a Einlion
Honestly at the end of the day it's your story write it how you want, the boo-hoo's about people's dislikes and/or insecurities is irrelevant 🤷♂️ ( more so when they never read the story and are going off the tags) just because it has things like NTR, yandry's or lemons doesn't mean that it's a bad story Things like: Character development, Grammar, World building Etc... are the most important!! readability over content
- THCCULTIVATOR1mthComentou"No need for such caution, Mr. Anderson." A male voice sounded in the dark.
- THCCULTIVATOR1mthComentou
hummmm........ now I wonder? who could this mysterious fierce beauty be?🤔
With her long black hair, piercing ocean-blue eyes, sharp and confident gaze, and a hint of a mischievous smile, the beautiful woman exuded an irresistible combination of fierceness and allure. Her movements were sharp, yet elegant. She looked confident and unapproachable as she stepped closer to the crowd with her gaze fixated on one point. - THCCULTIVATOR1mthComentou
It's the whole reason why mankind hasn't evolved.
That is also why mankind desired to cleanse their body and remove the impurities within their body; to grow stronger and evolve. - THCCULTIVATOR1mthComentou
moles? I think the word you're looking for is "scars"
Several moles are spread alluringly on his neck and leave an aching memory of his fortunate adventures. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthComentou
superman.... marvel.... run kid it's a trap! lol
While Ainz listened, he couldn't help but marvel at her sweet and tender voice, and the way she sang the song, it was the first time he had such a serene moment in his life, in a long time. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthComentou
how does she know about superman?
..But superman he'll soon be. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthComentou
That's what you call a "unicorn" So rare that there considered fantasy and myth.
But Rose wasn't stuck on the 'who' or the 'why' of the situation. She was taking her mother's words to heart. She would sit in the number one spot among any women Damien would gain in the future. Not through scheming and deceit, but love and aid. This was the best way to earn her place with him. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthRespondeu a Spirit_Immortal
- THCCULTIVATOR3mthRespondeu a DrAssassin17
I know right! I do what I can to help
"We have now arrived at the EIA training base. Cadets are now advised to prepare for disembarkation." - THCCULTIVATOR3mthComentou
well..... on a positive note at least he won't have to finish paying off that insanely high price of the S24
His eyelids closed as his heartbeat and breathing ceased. - THCCULTIVATOR3mthRespondeu a
I know right.... I do what I can 👍
"We have now arrived at the EIA training base. Cadets are now advised to prepare for disembarkation." - THCCULTIVATOR3mthRespondeu a Supreme_IQ
ok ? so... wait...what? I'm confused as to how and why the MC of your first novel is intermittently referred to the MC name of your second novel? or did miss something?
"It's fine. Anyway, Kenji, this is Khan. I found him on the streets and have chosen for him to work here with you to save up some money to have a place. He's also a fast learner, what do you think?" Fuzuramama asked as the cook raised an eyebrow, before turning to look at Khan, who had the feeling as if a human eating bear had set its gaze upon him. - THCCULTIVATOR3mthRespondeu a BlakLord
🤔 um..... this one! its a repeat paragraph 😁 it's EXACTLY the same as the one before it sooooo you can lay those doubts to rest... I got you bro
The portal led him to another construction site with a dark blood purple portal, three men standing beside it as if complaining. Cy plopped his face and decided to enter that purple portal. - THCCULTIVATOR3mthPostado
This is by far my favorite story on WN. The grammar isn't as bad as most of the novels here and the few mistakes it does have are manageable. The characters and world building are just right (without multiple chapters or paragraphs repeating the same endlessly, I've found plenty and most being paid chapters) The only complaint I have is how long it took MC to use that badass trident 🔱 or at least find or buy one to use for the day to day butt kicking LOL. If your on the fence about reading? or not? Then wait no longer it might surprise you. NOTE TO AUTHOR: Would really like to see this published 👍