I don't know what the author is thinking but this doesn't make sense, it's basically an extra background that brags about how strong he is and his knowledge from time to time, there is no logic as to why he attracts girls, I don't know if the author ever had contact with women or had a lot of trouble thinking about a relationship.

Well the protagonist is a child who complains about everything and everyone, he can't stand the fact that demons act selfishly and he thinks he is superior to everyone, that is quite embarrassing and well the intelligence of everyone around him will decrease so that the protagonist doesn't I don't look bad.

As the author said, it is his first story and it has the problems of a beginner, it is very flat and very powerful, the mc There is no problem with a character being very powerful but it has to be balanced with a striking personality. and the MC doesn't have that

ok, you gave him 3 skills of a creation god. I hope you can balance this story well.

If you describe your character as handsome and charismatic, then you don't need powers related to sexuality. If you give it to them, it simply speaks to how desperate you are as an author.

There is so much garbage that I didn't need a system to explain it and what makes it very powerful is that it requires a charismatic character so that the story doesn't get boring.

Is the system a joke? Just say you have the power and what else do you need? I seriously hope you don't come up with nonsense that you need to train.

Translation If you realize that these powers are explained as simple fire manipulation, there isn't much difference other than temperatures and techniques.

I read up to chapter 30 of Hay, I couldn't stand the story anymore, if you're going to change the personality then do a rewrite.

The protagonist is useless, he just follows the canon like a child, the world of One Piecw is supposed to be one of adventure and freedom, the protagonist is the furthest thing from that.

Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.

Well the romance begins after 400 chapters (no joke) after 150 chapters the protagonist will become more gloomy, the author incorporates several concepts that do not add up

These are my personal tastes, don't worry, your story has a good basis, keep it up.

The general idea is good but the entire development is horrible, when you finish it you have to do a restructuring. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I hate the story that is so far from the original. but there is no system, there is no slave to the system, finally someone uses the powerful races of one piece and a single fruit that's 5 stars

This is a translation, it doesn't matter if I mention all the problems and solutions, the story will be left with all the garbage it already has.

It's for the review, no one is interested in reading about an extra character

So look for another story to translate, the Chinese make hundreds of fanfics and from time to time they release a new one among so much garbage.

There are many topics that the anime does not touch on because it is shonen, also the interactions of the protagonist with the main cast and the change of characters from class to b, also helping the villains since the only thing that moves them are their traumas. , a little therapy and that's it, they are healthy

Ok, calling it plagiarism was a lot, but the plot of your talentless son has already been used several times and is no different from other stories.