momoko_moko

Maybe they are trying to identify and kidnap children with magic?

Short, but the best chapter in a while. Finally some progress both mission-wise and with the couple.

Oh, I don't remember that. How interesting. I don't remember anything about his family.

Yes, I agree!

Really like this one. Characters are likeable and smart and not annoying. The slow relationship build feels real and I can't wait to see what happens. Hope this gets picked up!!

Had to go back to the last chapter after he called Grandma.You can see he was putting it together in the middle of the conversation then was teasing her.

I really want to see his POV, haha.

Yes!

Well written so far with few mistakes and likeable characters. The story isn't over the top, which I usually dislike. Looking forward to more.