Osakasan

breathing technique ??

really xD

what i hear*

this feels like a fairytale

The plot is good but the first few chapter are too short but it's okay.. i will still continue reading it.. Good job author keep going ..

The chapter is short or is this normally how it use to

The first chapter was cozy to read i like your writing style 😚

I'm not really a cultivation fan that's why this is the only rate I can give. But I Love the writing quality of the story i can easily understand and the grammar is good. The MC is really cool and overall everything is great! Keep up the good work!!