thank you for your support

Thank you for your review. I will try and improve it to make it more entertaining to read.

Thank you so much for the good reviews and I will try to improve it

Good punctuation and no grammar mistakes spotted

ok.

Excellent story. Did not disappoint me at all. I did not notice any noticeable grammar mistakes and good use of figurative language

Will do

Thank you for your support and yes I will try to shorten the paragraphs to make it much easier to read

Not really a fan of this genre but good character design and world background.

Great character development and world background. It is definitely worth the read. Writing quality is as good as it gets. I also recommend you read Modern Society

I hope this novel goes far. Please write reviews because it helps a lot and share it. Your support is my greatest motivation to continue writing. Also kindly suggest ways in which I can improve it