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ambt05

ambt05

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2023-03-29 UnidoGlobal
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  • ambt05
    ambt0525 days ago
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    I have varied thoughts about this story, which means I liked it! It moved really quickly through her early transitions and I nearly put it down when she started cooking (I’m not a fan of reading about recipes) but it moved on pretty quickly and carried on with the plot - I love that! I’ve been pleasantly surprised numerous times (I’m often able to know what’s about to happen before they’re done setting it up) and that alone makes me satisfied. There are a few cliches but they were at least combined in unique ways - I appreciate the thoughtfulness apparent throughout!

  • ambt05
    ambt0525 days ago
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    There is a lot of potential here but it lacks direction and execution. Lots of filler and inane conversations that is like listening to my parents “be amusing.” Sadly I bought the remaining chapters just before it got silly.

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
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    Good story setup and I like the FL’s casual indifference but the the name and gender mixups take me right out of it, and honestly I’m tired of the adopted family. It’s like the same drama over and over in every rebirth story. I’m disappointed that it’s following the tired formula. Unfortunately I feel the story has already stagnated. Maybe I’ll come back to it after a while but for now I’ll save my coins.

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
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    Great story, well paced, not much fluff (so far). However, a few points are preventing me from continuing: - -Its emphasis on purity culture is exhausting. As though a woman can be literally degraded by enjoying a biological imperative. I don’t like it, even if it’s only hurting the villains. -The fl’s body is 15 yrs old. It’s gross for her to be considered by the ml - he doesn’t know she’s mentally older, he’s looking at a child with barely a toe into adulthood. Makes him pervy. -If the story needs them to be married just let them get married, or better yet, make her body old enough for this to be appropriate. Why all this drama about doing it for the greater good? Maybe I’m just over of the unending stories and implication that a woman has to be married to have “relations” but cannot get married until it’s established that she’s not really interested in said relations. -also the ml literally has a woman SAed regularly. Doesn’t matter if she’s a villain. There’s barely a mention of the emotional devastation that would follow, only the social implications and her loss of “qualification” for good marriage. Tsk.

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
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    I’m catching the overall gist of the plot but the action within the chapters is very confusing. How many chapters are we gonna spend in the hospital with severe allergies to everything? I like the concept but something’s getting lost in translation, I think. It was supposedly a tight family just wanting mom to step up but now all the kids are dividing into factions and there’s an extra one mixed in but somehow no one knows who’s related to who? I’m very confused. Aren’t the dna tests working? I have more questions but I think it all boils down to a confusing translation.

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
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    Not my cup of toxic tea. There’s too much abuse and not enough evidence of potential for growth before asking for money. The ML is not leadership material with his inability to use his own mind and intuition. Major plot hole - if the culture relies on the Moon Goddess to rule their lives then what makes him believe there’s such a thing as her making a mistake? It would be a core value he’d not dare to go against - having a king means they believe heavily in a hierarchy and he would have been brought up respecting Her authority. FL flip-flops regularly in her resolve. Despite his abuse she is begging for him to give her a scrap of affection - which also shows she is also lacking leadership ability. These people deserve each other and their entire civilization would suffer under their leadership. Just because it’s fantasy doesn’t mean it doesn’t have to make sense. P.s. I would have stopped this review after my first sentence but WB required more before posting. 🤷🏻‍♀️

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
    Respondeu a Tonya_Liechty

    Agreed, the chapters are short and somewhat unsatisfying. I’m disappointed bc the fl has a nice balance of engaging/aloofness, which most authors get wrong. I probably won’t continue, to save myself the frustration.

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
    Postado

    All the potential melted into a confusion of boring relationship banter and inconsistent pronouns. Why do all of these light Chinese novels have the exact same relationship arc? Why are all the lips bleeding after kissing? Why are people biting each other? Why must someone be sick, drunk or drugged for them to be affectionate? And why are these the only novels being suggested? I keep getting stuck into this algorithm of internalized misogyny and fake “rebel” women. I’m starting to suspect an intent to brainwash by this uncurrent of caving to men over the slightest bit of potential. Rant over.

  • ambt05
    ambt05a month ago
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    I don’t know if it’s the translation or if the author intended it this way, but “childish” is the over arcing feel. These are grown adults behaving like middle school kids. Sycophants , mushy resolve, tantrums. Feels like cartoon-level maturity from every character.