Lelol01

Yes there are some mistakes buy the story Is great. P.S. try to use the shop system more likes buying weapon or skills, not overpowered, if you Need Just make the price go up a bit

Greta story and chapter, i prefer pratice powers

Day 2 Sorry if i missed a day or more Okay the story has much potential because of the other world that works in base of dark or light magic, but i feel like you are leaving behind the light magic world because other than the all healing potion you didn't exactly speak about anything else like we dont know of the re are some special creature there or of a clan or rave that was Born there, and i know its hard but please don't lose Hope (this story has some of the biggest and stringeste potential i have ready in this site togheter with a i have a game creatori system in Marvel.)

Day 2 Did i miss a day? i dont remember. Wella here we are 2 thing i like about this book Is that the system offers you a certain liberty about creating a game that Is a down side or a advantage, because you can choose ti male games like Minecraft or fornite easily enough. Buy what about a game like Red dead redemption 2? It wold prove an harder challenge for the MC because of the choice in the story. Okay basically what i am saying Is that Minecraft has an end, but It has only One Designed end and It Will Always end like that. Red dead redemption has more end in base of the choice so yes It Will be harder to male a game like that

Day 1 asking for a new chapter ( gonna do It every day till new chapter and gonna add some things for keepong the comment intere Song) P.s. I like how you made Lily Potter survive (blocked in another dimensioni or not) she has much potential, buy are you gonna explain how Lily found the ritual for the other dimensione? (Sorry if you ecxplained and i Just dont Remember)

Day 1 waiting for another update ( ye i am gonna do It every day till and update but i will add things to keep the comment intere Song ) P.s. like for exemple i really like that the system Is concentaiting on maging games and have a multdimensional shoo to give Powers to the MC but i ask how is gonna Happy the system with a game loke Cod that is divided in more games Is it gonna be to buy Just 1 game or the whole Cod in a package