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InvictusKyrielight

InvictusKyrielight

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Reading aways was my favorite way of passing time, a way of experiencing fantastic things that can both ground and distance us from reality, It can use fantasy to bring new perspectives into our day to day problems, or simply be a way to relax during troubling times. Now I plan to try my hand at writing, thanks for reading this. Wish me Lucky!

2023-03-01 UnidoGlobal
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Why he is always picked by surprise? Shouldn't his "magical" ADHD prevent this.

    Alex and Thalia looked at each other with gleeful expressions, but that moment of distraction caused Alex to have his back to the trees on the left. Another one of the baby drakons leapt from the forest, hellbent on taking at least one of the demigods from the trunk. 
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    Why does he have eyebags? In his mother domain he should be at his strongest and most comfortable. Like Percy in the ocean.

    "Just in case. And what gave it away? My eyebags? Me being always awake in the middle of the night? Maybe I'm just a night person."
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    He sounds whiny in this paragraph.

    The night was annoyingly loud. No, scratch that, the rain was. There was so much thunder rumbling in the clouds that Alex could barely listen to his own thoughts. The minimum the stupid ward his mother had made could do was dampen the sound, no? Still, it was weird. In the almost a year that he spent living in his grandparents' cabin, he'd never seen the sky behave like that.
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    Pressure. Seeing someone you know being held as hostage can be a "small bit" terrifying imagine.

    "I'm so sorry, pipsqueak," Alex said, trying to keep himself together. He, too, wanted to cry, but was so tired from that little teleportation trick he doubted he had the strength for it.
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    He is imitating his father...

    "You know, I remember a time when I usually made breakfast." Alex joked, ruffling her hair. "Thanks, pipsqueak. They look delicious."
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Respondeu a Tobirama_uchiha777

    He is 12

    Looking at her now, asleep, I'm amazed by how peaceful her face is. If I'm going to be her "dad", I've got to be worthy of her trust. The two of us had no luck with our godly parents, so I have to be better than that. Better like my dad. I may only be eleven, but that's no excuse. I'll keep this little family together.
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Thanks! Good work.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    Thanks for the chapter! Greek gods will be Greek gods.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    Why does he have the scar? His healing factor should leave nothing behind. I know some people find scars "cool", but is a little inconsistent, or he also have a terribly scared belly?

    Alex touched the scar on the left side of his mouth that never healed and felt the uneven skin. Even the police had asked if he'd gotten into messy situations before.
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    Thanks for your work, great story!

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
    PJO: Nightcrawler
    Livros e literatura · NyanTa
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    The most traditional dragon behavior, maiden hunting.

    The fat Westerland Lord was 'convinced' to marry someone else after a 'visit' from Daenys when she took up the 'duty' of unthawing his roads. Then a short trip later to Casterly Rock and back home and all of a sudden Cerelle was a permanent resident of Harrenhal and the personal handmaiden of Daenys.
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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    Respondeu a Christopher_Skiles

    They are cultists of Zeref, the setting version of the devil, they are evil for the sake of evil, the suffering of the people inside, is probably just as ritualistic important as the stones that make the tower.

    I would not give them the satisfaction.
    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
    Anime e quadrinhos · CORNBRINGER
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Great chapter. Thanks for your effort!

    Ch 81 81
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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    Respondeu a romeotango148

    That was the hippies, they popularized this, "make love not war."

    "Then he fucked me right there on the skull of the large dragon... the Red Waste had never been so hot as the day we made love on a dragon's skull that was even bigger than Balerion." I still long to know more about the dragon that died in the Red Waste, its skull was there when I walked through it in my first life and it looked exactly the same this time around.
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 78 78
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 181 180 R18
    GoT: Break the Wheel
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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    Is this a Lobo reference?

    Main mans Kids *spoilers*
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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    Is bad to say that I want war?This chapter got my blood pumping again, no matter how it goes from here on. This was awesome!Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 69 69
    GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy
    Livros e literatura · Pretending_Author
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 29 Field of fire
    What is dead may never die (Theon SI)
    Livros e literatura · Ironwolf852
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  • InvictusKyrielight
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    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 28 Stopping the lions
    What is dead may never die (Theon SI)
    Livros e literatura · Ironwolf852
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