Felition

marvelous job, hat's off to the author [img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

These are good but we need more horrifying moments. Consider introducing eerie settings, unexpected twists, and building suspense with chilling details. Amplify the fear factor by delving into characters' fears and vulnerabilities. Creating a sense of dread can enhance the overall horror experience.

Man, the cliffhanger moments are killing me.