ricardo_yammouni

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also i recomend adding pics to the characters, it add more depth and lets us have a better idea of what were looking at yu know what i mean.

also can yu have him look like henry cavil plzzzz!!!!!

you know how theres like mythologies and myths today, have merlins status also be at the same rank or higher in the myths, so like when someone asks who he is, he'll say hes merlin and theyll be like that merlin omg.

i think you should highlight the recognition that the mc ids gettng from the villiage!!!!

yeaaaahhhhhhh babbyyyyyyyyy!!!!

ohh yeah and add some tags, if you dont know how just ask me.

for the title... how about the CHRONOCALS OF MERLIN or life of merlin, idk just an idea. and for the pic, have it stand out cause its what will attract people to yur fic and the title too, make the title catchy.

btw i recomend that yu give us a few pic of the mc, and make him hand some and kind of merlin like, also like have him have a different outfit and style for every era or setting!!!!

yeaaaahhhh babyyyyyyy!!!!!!