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brother I so I came back after a very long time and had o re-read the whole story again personally I don't get why you sent him to that dungeon or what happened in the dungeon wasn't explained well I really lost the grasp of the story from the academy arc the system of the academy actually makes the mc seem weak I am not getting things well in the academy arc so I lost the story so pls clarify the things (ps-I am kind of broke right now so I can't give you gifts but i'll return next week with a lot of gifts ho ho ho ho)

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and pls look at my review too

yes there were somethings will read right now..... by the way thank you for clarifying and thank you for not making the princess the fl

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will the mc hide his abilities, be low key or he will show it to fullest hiding only some important things ???? this will decide whether i will read the tory or not pls telll

and can someone pls tell me how to use these golden tickets I got three reminders for golden ticket expire

Alright so I was stacking it for a very long time and now that I have read till chapter 130 I feel that I am now able to comment on this masterpiece while the first few chapters were complicated for me to understand you were able consolidate the pace of the story which was good. Let me talk about the characters, The mc's personality is something I am still not able to grasp but by understanding on how you want to showcase his personality I think you are able to do justice to it in the recent chapters. If I talk about the interaction between the characters it is good and well written, though the mc,s interaction with his parents to me seems unreal, it does not feel natural to me and as you are an Indian I do hope you are able to understand what I am talking about, though his interactions with the other characters are way better than most of the novels here, good job. Now talking about the world background it is very well written, but it is confusing for me as I don't even know the gods from other mythologies other than our hindu ones, you were also able to do justice with how to showcase the world by describing even minute details which is worthy of respect The story development is also going good but the only downside of this novel is the number of mysteries there are just way to many mysteries and new one keeps coming up without the previous ones getting solved this really gives a headache. And also there is no hint of the fl coming I definitely would not want that princess to become the fl I want someone who is badass cool op and have a practical view of the world just like the mc. well other than these the story is definitely intriguing the characters also feel real, the story is good too and it feels good to see a fellow countryman doing such a great job. keep it up @DevilDarkness

and please don't tell me her sister will a romantic interest as well

when will the fl come............ and do not the princess the fl pls I don't like her personality at all she is the same as the hypocrite do-gooder protagonist