Netaram_Rajak

how is this a good villain novel,mc is pathetic beyond belief, he suffereed a loss because of some heroine, who neglect him,and he is being to nice to them,acting like a typical hero protaganist. if compare to the main villain novel, this one is truly pathetic.

increase word count and chapter count

dont't waste ur time just write more chaps

write more chaps

no man, u can't do that. even if he is not the original,he has all the memories and experience the privious one had. and he must have seen the girl brutally killing him. so all in all he must break the engagement with her. but only after becoming strong,let's say after this war, where people will acknowledge his powers and fighting skills. and before the start of the war he should recuirt more undeveloped characters who will later become stronger. and make a romantic advancement towards her sister, she giveup everything for him,so he should have her, and all the other 5 beauties. and make MC's feats so good that his fiances's felt heart broken .and will do anything to get back together with him ,even killing the hero.😈😈😈😈

can't do that,u young generation people don't know how to respect your elders.😼

it's very hard on you,u shouldn't write engaging novel.😁

how old are u

where the hell did u live and what is ur partime job

hey man update 2 chaps atleast