BestPotatoPeeler

very interesting story

Nice first chapter

cool thoughts

he better not have a rope in his room

thanks for reading

He might not have been a hero, but Floki knew that allowing Grendor to escape with the girl would have been equivalent to letting her die. He wasn't the type of person to jump into action for every crime he witnessed, but he also couldn't stand idly by and allow a young girl to be taken right in front of him, his conscience just wouldn't let him.

Those were his thoughts at that moment, but if you continue reading you will see him correcting himself

Okay I will try!

The story itself could be entertaining, only the level of your writing needs to be approved by a lot for me to keep reading the story. I suggest using some AI tool that will help you rephrase your sentences.

The story centers around Floki and his journey, but as he progresses, he will encounter a diverse cast of characters who will play important roles in his story. While the narrative primarily follows Floki's perspective, readers can expect to delve into the perspectives of other characters as well, including the recently introduced Mei Feng. Each of these characters will have their own unique development and arc, adding depth and richness to the overall story. So the story will continue to focus on Floki, but other characters will also have a prominent role in the story. Thank you for reading and if you have any more feedback please let me know!