Well the start is nice and intriguing... But I still don't like the characters especially the father being so calm after his kid fell ... Ugh! The book has a really interesting point of not allowing Jeremy to suicide on the planet. It gives a hope of character development. It's going to be a good book. I HOPE THE AUTHOR CAN UPDATE DAILY AND NOT BE LAZY!!!!!!!! It's a book worth reading overall. Also, please update 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Hi! Dear Author, it's Me hi I'm the problem. Jk. The book is very intriguing for people who can dive into fantasy books. The author had done a great job with the writing. You can feel the emotion surge through each word, each chapter and the entire book of course. The world development of a new place is done spectacularly. And, the character design. It's fantastic. I really love Billie. Actually, she makes me imagine as if I'm her. I love her way of dealing with things. And, from the start to where I have read. It's fabulous. Like really fabulous. I spent three days reading those thirteen chapters. And, it's worth it. Keep up the good work! Will keep the book in my library!

The author has written this novel so well to keep the readers on their toes. It's the kind of novel that can make you laugh and is very relaxing to read its a great read. The cultivation method is amazing and the story is very ... mesmerizing . You can drown in the story without even realizing it. The grammar is also good . Be sure to give it a try!

The story is great. From the sypnosis it's very hookable. I personally would like to thank the author for using the first chapter to actually give of the world that will be behind the curtains. It's actually a very funny and intriguing story possessing the ability of letting the readers actually relate or want to be the characters in the book. God! But I seriously hope I don't get reincarnated into the book since I'm leaving this review. I won't be able to survive. Hahaha! Overall it's a good read. It's not those type of books that would leave you a bit irritated.

I have to say the start of the book is quite intriguing . I like it very much. The book has a lot of potential as well as the ability to hook readers. The Grammar is also good. You can try the book I'm pretty sure you won't regret it. The author is already doing a great job at portraying her very original idea through the book. From what I have red till now it's a good read.