TypicalOtaku4235

I want to say that I really liked the fanfic, keep writing, this fanfic has great potential.I really hope this fanfic won't be.I wish you good luck, creative inspiration and all the best.

Lucifer

I really liked the idea, but for me personally the writing is poor and there are many shortcomings.Somehow the dialogues are weak and the way you insert characters looks terrible. But I believe in you and I wish you to improve yourself.