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raizell24

raizell24

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i'm bored !!!

2022-12-20 UnidoGlobal
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  • raizell24
    raizell245d
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    I stopped at Ch 37...man that was a mess. Let's not talk about how disgusting op he is with a mind of virgin teenager running after love and a*s... Just jump to ch 37 and you can decide what type of novel is this.Honestly that was what they called :[an excuse uglier than the misdeed]Steel them? Bull*hit, it's just natural they would do what they did if she treats her sons and husband like thin air...in the end she's no more than a wh*ore and our greatest mc of course had no issue with her being that way. Cultivating their mentality and teaching them how to not be naive and show them the world and it's cruelties is one thing even if it bring the dark side of it, but at least show them that she loved them...yet simply ingoring her family and treating them worse than trash when they try everything and then when they left her alone because another woman treated them way better ^even if she had undercover intentions it's the truth that she never abandon them even after she got what she wants(nobility) from them and let them be with her^. so a woman like this ^fresia^ mc finds her pitiful, lovely...etc and he dare shows his face in front of her (old) family like they are in the wrong and he is way above who will take care of her lol...bruh she just reached to him because he gave her powers. Like for example, the first time she saw him when he entered her palace without his aura? She didn't even glance at him and goes for the kill by unleashing her origin aura which by the way alone could burst a ^mortal^ into bloody mist. If not for him being op the story would have ended there...no lovey-dovey no husbando no bull*hit. Straight out to meet the god.Overall this is one of madness i can't ever understand how you authors find it enjoyable to wrote a powerful mc that can't even use his mind and only guided by his lower head. Bruh for once i wish to read about a normal op man who reach for descovery, experiences, exciting battles, conquest or try to build his own powerhouse and had a pride of a man who choose a decent woman not just a ho rny dog who runs after pus*ies for 37 ch and beyond.(And if you find the next chapter when she propose to him the idea to corrupt a family who only seek love and happiness exciting then congratulation...you are beyond saving)

    Heavenly Harem Sect
    Ação · ADboy245
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  • raizell24
    raizell245d
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    The first few chapters were dam* interesting being a father and cute daughter who faced the unfortune of betrayel and died. Although he used his ' intelligence and insight ' to revenge instantly which later in the story vaporited and mc became dumb average. Anyway Everything is good after he transmograted, became demon and etc...the issue start after his daughter birth to another baron couple, when instead of the story should starts being interesting the author just made it bland. For one the mc just became... useless. He starts being highly emotional like some club dancer facing difficulties with her bf. his power and skills advancment came to a halt even though he starts building that useless army and what made all this boring? His thoughts process. Like bruh he can't even fight more than 3 on the same level as him(canon fodders in that world) yet he wants to take down gods? Like bruh the level gap in between is just crazy, next is the author focus...i believe like me many found it boring to have the pov changed on someone else for so long when the mc himself didn't have many time screen. Why would i care about reading 10 chapters about bunch of nobels and entrance exam when the mc himself isn't in that academy, for the daughter? It make it even more weird when she had new parents and you start introducing heug(or whatever his name) who is likely to be her bf when again...the begining should focus on the mc more and he could have disguised and join the academy to bring more chaos and train with their resources instead of ^i will make gods perish for puting me against my hero daughter and kill their devotee bla bla bla^. Overall a good start but i just found it boring to read about side story in the begining of the main one. A remake for this with more serious matter and a little twik in his personality and his daughter will make it way better. Instead of this wanabe demon emperor and army you could have him use that forest for far more improvement yet he just left after being a little strong. and more creativity on his chaotic core instead of thunder slash and fireball. Man that's long lol. Good luck

    Demon Emperor's Rise: Becoming The Greatest Villain For My Daughter
    Fantasia · StumblingtoSuccess
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  • raizell24
    raizell2418d
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    Well i see a lot of reviews with 5 stars here...i honestly don't think it deserve this much. Overpowered ?? Overpowered you said lol. From the reviews and how much he and that masochiste boasted i thought his level is amazing and all. I came here expecting something like a truly overpowered being who likes to act as a side character but when they get serious you can enjoy a fight or a show of a truly op character , let's say like shadow for example, anos, the slime, ainz and some from the good novels i read etc...but what are you gonna find here? A mc who have no specific personality and character traits. At first cold and indifferent, then bored, idiot, pretenious...yet smart? a mess that he is predicted to be way op when he get back to earth...yet once summoned again he starts acting like a weakling idiot and author you did your best to make it look funny but i don't believe a truly op man even when bored won't find it annoying to be treated like ant by women he can slaught with a sneez. Going as far as to accept badmouthing like a stepping stone even if he was trying to avoid being on spotlight, a warrior have his pide no matter what....then there's the break point, his fight with that goddess who kicked his ass to oblivious. If it was another novel i would be impressed as he made it out alive against a goddess yet he was the one who said and act like the most powerful there in the new world aside from his partner but what i get? The Overpowered mc like the title said is just another strong to weak mc yet weak to the strong who truly did hide behind his female partner after the beating he got and what even worse? Author nerfed him even more by some curse...killed a demon god my a**. You can see it as a ranting yet this is my honest review for those to know what to expect from this. Good luck

    The World's most Overpowered Side-Character
    Fantasia · Rowan_Eternal
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  • raizell24
    raizell2425d
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    i was about to start reading until i saw the author name, bruh...i know you most likely gonna delete this.

    KanoKari: Romcom System
    Anime e quadrinhos · HentaiGodZ
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  • raizell24
    raizell2427d
    Respondeu a Hardy1j

    well i feel you bro...ever since he turns him to edgy and psycho kid who liked to see people kill each other in front of him and the author thought this is cool i know where all this is going. it's unfortunate that such a good plot and characters turned to this

    Taking It All From The Protagonist
    Fantasia · Averagewrites
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  • raizell24
    raizell2427d
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    it's weird to see him acting normal where lives being taken in front of him while he sit there laughing and enjoying it when he himself was doing everything to live just a day before. i think this type of psycho mc isn't for me, tftc

    Ch 22 TWENTY-TWO...
    Taking It All From The Protagonist
    Fantasia · Averagewrites
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  • raizell24
    raizell2428d
    Respondeu a UndeadBeing
    A Ghoul In Dc[Completed]
    Outros · TheGodSage
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  • raizell24
    raizell2429d
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    just...what have i read? bruh i need to wash my eyes now. i am a reader and got goosbumbs from the amount of cringe here and i don't want to imaginethe feeling of writing it...overall a mess grammar and writing style with a disgusting mc and lot of emojis while mc crying aloud how he is sad because his wife slept with another bla bla bla...author you can start by reading other novels first see how things work try to understand or even copy their style if you can, stop using imoji on novel because it just disturb the pace and no one likes them. good luck for your next.

    revange of a nice and good husband
    Oriental · kaiden_sensi_01
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  • raizell24
    raizell2429d
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    Incredible...man i really liked this one, the best villain-type mc you could find. A mature and calculative man who have his goals set clear...didn't give a #### about what others think and isn't your usual filthy villain who just goes about doing pathetic tricks or just straight out attempt to either mind or physically rape the heroines to love him back instead of the protagonist. Even th heroines here doesn't seem the usual braindead like his sister per say. She just reacted bad at first due to the bad past of his predecessor's faults later on she stands by his side as a family does. His way to solve the problems? The best...he tries to solve matters peacefully but once it start to became beyond repair? he just eliminate them. Edgy? Not exactly when the world itself is against him...overall author did a great job to give this fresh and normal mc thrown on chinese-illogocal-type novel, waiting for more chapters.

    Stuck in a Chinese novel
    Fantasia · Bad_Wolf_7811
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
    Respondeu a Dark_PersonJJ

    i don't see how everyone is oc...you are just hating sarada and to this moment he did every character right, sarada really treat naruto as her idol and want to be like him in the original serie, boruto rebellious still the same and hinata and himawari acted as usual, those are the introduced character till now and he did a good job. aside from the strange in ino advanced all seem good.

    Nindō: Dominion
    Anime e quadrinhos · Addyctive7
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
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    it wasn't that long since i got disappointed in a naruto fanfic about him jumping to dxd yet here i didn't expect to find a hidden gem, man this version of him is way better than i expected, an op naruto father like we all wished him to be like on the original boruto serie, aside from those strange moments with sarada lol...well not many chapter out yet but i already enjoyed those 20 ch. good writing, nice twist of having that unknown entity helping him out, and overall the characters feels right with only few exceptions like ino strange behaviours. keep the good work author, waiting for more.

    Nindō: Dominion
    Anime e quadrinhos · Addyctive7
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
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    so now the guy who wants his familly safety, wellfare and wish to meet them is the villain, naive and stupide and the girl who broke with this boyfriend for another and doesn't care what happens to her family is strong minded and good girl for keeping? bruh, i became akikan fan after that chat group thing of haru yet now with every nnew ork of his the mc and characters turns more diqgusting than those chinese extremes...what a waste of good systeme and story

    Ch 32 Good luck!
    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime e quadrinhos · akikan40
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
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    A great novel, amazing mc,fml, and a lovely relationships. I enjoyed reading every chapter of it especially that of the old man and the mc...hope he won't die, and even more his relation with the villainess, just the right amount of everything...not too submessive and there is no usual annoyance i found on other novels of the same theme where either the male lead is piece of **** arrogant and lusty for every woman or too passive with hidden cuck fetish. Here you got a drop of everything...action, drama, comedy, tragedy. Freindship, blossoming love, interesting powers and fight scenes. Overall one of the best i've come to read lately. Unfortunately my broken self can't afford the locked chapters lol...anyway you did great job author. Hope that won't change later.

    Villainess's Slave: I Transmigrated into an Eastern Fantasy Comic
    Oriental · DD_TheDreamer
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
    Respondeu a raizell24
    DxD: A Blonde Boy
    Anime e quadrinhos · Vengeance9578
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
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    why stopped the update? it's a good start and we all have the same dislike about what author did to leon even tho if any one were to be in victor's place with his power and all they most likely will do worst...anyway it's a good start wish there was more chapters with good plot

    Ch 2 Chapter-1: Another chance
    Leon Walker finally snapped
    Anime e quadrinhos · Secret_Boss
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
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    i actually like the idea of naruto tossed there in dxd and all but you nerfed him too much, way too much that his level seems to drop back when he start training with jiraya. ironic how you did him that bad while giving him all those cheats like the rinnegan and the yin yang seal, all the six paths powered and all biju yet he still find it hard to fight a bunch of nobodies from the hero faction. and worse he almost lost in speed battle, like really bro? it would be much interesting if you didn't nerfed him and made him a softie that sona and rias can bark on him as they want. or if madara was there in his stead . overall i enjoyed the first 20 ch until the fight with that persus guy when he nearly kill naruto and ^surprised^ him with speed lol. best luck for your next work bro keep trying.

    DxD: A Blonde Boy
    Anime e quadrinhos · Vengeance9578
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  • raizell24
    raizell241mth
    Respondeu a angel_2771

    i agree with what you just said but take a moment and search for antares. his power level, what have he done on the novel, manhwa....after that imagine if that mad man was here. swapped with single move? bruh i'm sure he'll go after great red directly to prove why he is called ^dragon monarch^ where i can't tell the outcome i'm sure he'll survive. now that man himself found himself in troubles when sung jinwoo got after his ass in the dimensional gap chasing after him and his ^dragons^ like crazy. and now he have milions of shadows. that man in dxd? well they would be fuc*ed up if he ddecide t's just right to go against the whole wworld s in dxd he have nothing to lose but everything to take. just my opinion tho.

    DxD: Shadow Monarch
    Anime e quadrinhos · 6_SHINIGAMI_9
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  • raizell24
    raizell243mth
    Respondeu a Djabilong

    chill up bro summon are for dirty works...you can't bother with small fries that's what your summon are for, that's my opinion for sure

    All I need is to get hit by a car and I'm toast. Well, that just means I have to lean harder into my undead to make up for that weakness. Why fight headfirst when you dont have to? Just make a bunch of undead that can tank the hits for you.
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime e quadrinhos · Bronz_Deck
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  • raizell24
    raizell244mth
    Respondeu a Siege_Jay

    i got you bro but i just can't come to like her even if you guys saw (yandere potential) in her like if you re-read carefully you'll find that the only reason she didn't have s*x with that guy is just because the mc enter the room(she was top naked and kissing while waiting for him to pen*etrate her and in her pov she said it clearly that she enjoyed his touch...) well my point is that the mc has many pure girl that loved him dearly so there's no point for her to be in his life again as a lover.except that maybe some poeple here don't mind such a messed up situation like this one and are fine with someone like her as a partner

    Ch 135 Tsukimi Chifuyu
    A life with the Author
    Anime e quadrinhos · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • raizell24
    raizell244mth
    Respondeu a ferferfer2

    maybe it's the overall power? i doubt it's just pure strength but then again i can expect everything from this

    Strength: 350
    Shadow Monarch (Solo Leveling x HsDxD)
    Anime e quadrinhos · Laurentiino
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