Darknull

picture where is it

picture

iIhave a question is the main character going to be a goody too shoes hero that doesn't kill

stop with the lessons shit,it shows that he has a family, it's not needed anymore,are you using chatgpt to write the story

you could add more and make the reflection at least once every three or two chapters maybe even five,maybe make him kill someone and have that internal turmoil that is used so many times

let him be more versatile with his lightning,he has only two moves,the fight scenes are great just the moves are repetitive

it was great

don't drop

that was perfect

just boring, overpowered MC fights are boring,MC is Brain dead, giving too much reward and too powerful rewards, characters aren't fleshed out,they are even stupid it's like a Chinese novel with better translation and writing,and he gets too strong too fast,he adapted to the reincarnation or transmigration too quickly,the whole storyline is good just too generic overpowered,system, powerful rewards, unearned pride, arrogance and confidence.useless fight scenes,stupid characters.