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Prasen_Syndrome

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2022-11-27 UnidoIndia
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1mth
    Respondeu a WeaverOfNightmares

    don't worry sir i will be back , I have suffering from some serious issue for the past few months. Thus i stopped writing, But i will continue writing it. Hope to get you support

    Milf World And System
    Fantasia · Prasen_Syndrome
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Postado

    This is my very first adult novel. I am also writing another novel named "i Desire A System" if you wish then give it a try too. I really appreciate your review about this novel. Please share this novel with you friends, the poor view count really demotivates me.

    Milf World And System
    Fantasia · Prasen_Syndrome
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Postado

    the plot is very good. This was my first such kind of novel and it didn't dissapointed me.I enjoyed the novel. I hope the writer will keep on the good work.

    Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
    Oriental · Daoist_Drumstick
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    been *on a date (and moreover) must not be used together.

    Este número foi suprimido.
    Reincarnation of the greatest detective of 21st century
    Fantasia · WalktowardtheApple
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Respondeu a DRACONIAN619

    bro you have stopped reading my novel. Please Give it a try , i have released new chapters

    I Desire A System
    Fantasia · Prasen_Syndrome
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Respondeu a Prasen_Syndrome

    'i desire a system"

    Ch 66 Chapter 64 : Game
    In the movie worlds with my system
    Filmes · lucifer_112
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Respondeu a DRACONIAN619

    bro please read I desire a system

    Ch 66 Chapter 64 : Game
    In the movie worlds with my system
    Filmes · lucifer_112
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Respondeu a DRACONIAN619

    bto please read my novel "i desire a system". You used to read it. I have recently updated the chapters.

    Ch 34 CHAPTER 34 : AFTER ONE YEAR
    In the movie worlds with my system
    Filmes · lucifer_112
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    nice i liked it, your writing keeps on improving.

    Ch 6 Swords Feel Different When In Dreams 1
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    *3 person

    On my way, I thought why there was a 3 people room system because I didn't want any roommates or stuff like that but I just accepted it regardless. Slithering my arm in my hair and seeing how it has already started growing again made my arms itch because it was a fresh cut I expected to stay in shape for at least a week but it seems like that isn't the case.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    *weird

    It could hardly be called a train with how stretchy it was, and the weirder fact is you can't even feel any change in the train thanks to chunks of metal covering it. Yes, you get those occasional shakes but other than that it is pretty smooth and chill.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    *laid on one of the chapter was good

    I laid down in one of the 5 seats like it was a bed, dropping my phone in my head while I was trying to find a movie.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    comma after down

    I dropped my hands down my eyes starting to shine, what have I done? Even though I had no idea what was wrong I realized it was something that happened because of me.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    your writinng really improved, you are making proper use of puntuation

    It was almost like a new rock was being added each time, Ren's father always comes back late even though he's extremely loyal to my mom. Because thanks to his work he has a lot of trips but since the pay is good he can't say no.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    a comma must be plalced after complicated

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    again too long sentence with a lot of thing going on. try to break it in 2 sentence.

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    away from home is not necessary , it can be omitted

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Comentou

    the sentence is too long. generally readers might get confused. so try to brea it into 2 or 3 sentences.

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Book is dropped
    Fantasia · KexoHD
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Respondeu a Alex_morg

    ~prasen#2296

    I Desire A System
    Fantasia · Prasen_Syndrome
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  • Prasen_Syndrome
    Prasen_Syndrome1yr
    Respondeu a KingRig

    Sir, I have been writing a novel named "I desire a system". I would be very thankful to you if you could read it and give me a review. I am trying really hard but not getting much views, your smallest support can really help me improve. Thankyou.

    Ch 1462 Eternal Glory (END)
    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
    Fantasia · Elyon
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