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Jake_State_3577

Jake_State_3577

Lv11
2022-11-21 UnidoGlobal
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  • Jake_State_3577
    Jake_State_3577a year ago
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    good book better than the other highly rated garbage out there you've probably come across give it a try it won't kill you... probably.

  • Jake_State_3577
    Jake_State_3577a year ago
    Respondeu a An_Ineloquent_Pen

    cool

  • Jake_State_3577
    Jake_State_3577a year ago
    Postado

    good enough for a rating.... give it a try

  • Jake_State_3577
    Jake_State_3577a year ago
    Postado

    such a naive author so many things are done wrong the value of money is not understood the necessity for power scaling is ignored and many other things make no sense to someone who is not an idiot the author needs some hardship in his life to better understand the world this writing doesn't deserve any positive feedback

  • Jake_State_3577
    Jake_State_35772 years ago
    Postado

    fucking trash do not read this shit it is such a waste of time

  • Jake_State_3577
    Jake_State_35772 years ago
    Postado

    sometimes the writing becomes harder to read but overall the story is well written and developed at neither too fast nor too slow a pace the characters are on a survival of the fittest mentality which makes sense given the world background and has a few interesting characters that appear later the update stability is good but was on a hiatus for a while earlier on overall everything about the story is good and I recommend reading it the only thing that could be improved are the fighting scenes although they are very good especially using sound effects examples(boom bang crash ect) adding immersion they seem a bit to slow paced but are still good just could get better.