ViYongRay
If you want to write, make sure you yourself enjoyed what you write. If people like what you write, good for them. But you have to be your own first fan. Telling stories through my own way
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ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a SoManyAngelsThe fog shall slowly dispersed, and the narration be revealed. Are you able to wait to see that day? I do wonder. However, I myself are uncertain since nothing is for certain. An outside force is preventing the story from being told. Or maybe, it's just the disconnection through time. - ???
- ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a SoManyAngels
At this point I'm convinced my keyboard auto correct is massing with me
- ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a SoManyAngels
nah it helped. I didn't noticed some of these mistakes when editing. Or my keyboard is massing with me again ;-;
- ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a VertiKalEl
but thanks for reviewing. i will try improve grammar ;-;
- ViYongRay2 years agoPostado
I would give 5 stars if the updating stability is good. but there's only one Freaking chap now so eh. anyways. I like the slow build up, I enjoy the world building. is quite good. keep up author! I can't wait for more chapters
Este livro foi excluído. - ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a CetusWritings
the confusion is part of the fun . kekeke
- ViYongRay2 years agoPostado
it's quite a straight forward novel, it feels like someone just explaining it.. the idea is quite interesting but so far can't really feel anything. Author, you shouldn't rush things too fast, slowly take your time to build the world. Only than will the impact be bigger. Also pls use commas once in a while...
- ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a Blanket
corrected. thanks
Este número foi suprimido. - ViYongRay2 years agoRespondeu a Blanket
Alrighty, next time when I write something similar, I will do that. Thanks for the comment
