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Complete indifference towards any character around him, I don't expect him to have deep affection towards his family since he hasn't been with them for long or any other person in the main world, but he treats them less than you would an npc in a game. When it comes to other characters. well, other than having names, occupations, and a couple of generic lines, they have less impact on the reader than a background character. It just feels like an emotionless person in a world full of robots.If you don't mind those, the other parts are fine.
From chapter 41, the translation goes downhill.
Not good, I recommend "Protect our clan leader".
I want to comment on every line of this chapter, but idk what to say.
Alright, that's my cue to stop reading.
Dropped at chapter 23, if romance is involved, I would prefer an mc with a bit more integrity. Come on, man, I don't think it takes until the girl gets half naked and grabs your penis for you to realize what's happening(he already has a girlfriend). Just my personal preference in MCs.
Pushover MC.............................
Dropped after chapter 35. Did not like what happened with the atkin guy and his knight. Didn't like what happened with the majority of the soldiers and the adventurers. I read in the comments that this includes harem, for god's sake add the tag. I would not have even started if I knew it.