Trying to make a name for myself out here on this platform with radical ideas, is it working? Does anyone actually read this thing? Hello hello?
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[ Review of story itself, translator is great at his job ] Pros: Author of story obviously knowledgeable about ships from different franchises it really shows. Despite having a massive ship with a whole city of people, there are still several challenges that he faces that actually makes it more tense. -Requiring people’s loyalty -Negotiating and working with those under him -Side characters providing genuine input, and main character deciding whether to agree or NOT to agree -Side characters have common sense, somehow even if the main chapter doesn’t Interactions with others feel real and there are several problems that the main character is able to fix by coordination and delegate responsibilities. Main character has the schematics for basically every ship, warhammer, halo, ones from other popular space titles. But building each requires time and a whole lot of researchers. Cons: THE MAIN CHARACTER Leo, I mean, we barely know anything about him. He’s shown he’s capable of coming up with plans on the spot, but is a poor tactician. I’m not going to spoil it, but he has good ideas, but their executions are terrible. (GETTING ANAKIN) another glaring issue is the very obvious anger issues Leo has. Smashed his fist twice out of anger, broke a mirror out of anger. While there few moments like these, it paints a character that while yes, being emotional, but prone to self damage. Nonetheless, if you enjoy a simple empire building that doesn’t require 20 hours of reading, I’d give it a shot.
this character development is kinda wack tbh
Who is bro 😭🙏🙏
Bro is not Madara 😭🙏
Completely forgot about this lol
Three wheels is crazy