Knight_Noctis

I mean, at the beginning, it seems a pretty neat story, no major grammar mistakes, well-written. But as you read more and more, you can see AI in it. I'm not sure if it's deliberate or not. The story continuesly write intangible nonsense .Like 'the mark of fairy tail comes warm as .....'. You can see this type of sentence or passages quite often . Also , then mc is op . Like you've not only given him op power but also gave absolute mastery of it. Basically, you've cut off every kind of power development for the mc . So, I mean it's hard to feel the shiver mc felt when the guy literally cast 'fk everything in that direction' . You could have just gifted him the inventory rather than master of it. Anyway, I don't see much future for this story. Good luck for your future endeavours

obviously this is not an ordinary laboratory .What did the mc expect anyway ? Feels like author is farming for unnecessary words

ahhh, i can see why he's such a big idiot

not really. At least I don't think so . But I don't know the canon . I always thought among all the elite trainers he'd at best rank among the elite fours

I mean this whole internal monologue trying to paint it as a threat to his freedom or something . it really isn't . It's unnecessarily making a bigger than it is

this is going to be tiring

this is going very cringy

yeah, this story is frustrating. probably not for me

Well, this is incredibly frustrating

so is mc an idiot or he has never seen naruto ? Which one ?