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what secret .5 chapters ?
i would have thought SAO made impossible to be naked, it would at least censor it, no ?
D is a god in the original, she is the one to have reincarnated the original protagonist
ah, I get why the fear of sea water was removed... he's an octopus, he's still an animal that's supposed to live underwater
I am not sure myself but from what I know it is a ranking list that shows multiple categories and shows the 10, 50, 100 or more best of each category from an omniscient point of view
dialogue feels a bit empty, you could describe the emotion felt by the character right after their words : "So how was your uncle ?" Veldanava said smiling. Something as simple as that can help a lot I believe, even more so if you can manage to add more emotion.
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it means that time moves slower everywhere outside the bubble (except maybe for people too strong to be affected)