Azrael_Blackfyre_

I'm sorry but doesn't he realize his plan will cause hundreds of millions of death when he separate adults from children most of the infants are going to die and the children who needs medical attention 24/7 are going to die too at this point he is pure evil

I'm sorry too many grammar mistakes but you get what I'm saying

Shameless author here to give myself five stars and to cheer myself

okay you're telling me all might couldn't provide a good medical attention for his wife girls this guy is a number one hero you have so many connections and he couldn't find someone who can actually make sure his wife survives what the f*** stupid way of killing her you could have just made some villain attack his home and kill her or something like that that's more believable than she died from birth complications that's just stupid there is literally there is people with actual powers that can heal you and you're telling me he cannot find even one I know they are rare but he have so many connections the hero industry the government so many connections and he couldn't find someone that could make sure he was alive survives and the name sucks to why the hell will he name him Clark Kent what is wrong with his own real name I mean all might is not actually using his name publicly so I don't know why he didn't give him his name

I don't care about him being op or taking away his knowledge maybe a little bit okay I mean it's kind of what makes it fun anyways the thing that actually bothering me is that he have blonde hair I mean the guy literally doesn't look like his mother or his father and not even one stark have blonde hair I mean you can try to ignore it by saying they trust each other so much or some b******* like that but I'm sorry no one question why the baby have blonde hair is crazy for me not even the servant or the people that live in winter fall not even one person question it I mean the guy is literally the first stark to have blonde hair no I want to see what's going to happen when the Lannister bastards are found out of course if it's going to happen in the first place because even then if no one going to go back and question why does the Stark have a blonde haired child that would be just stupid I mean you could have literally given him classic Stark looks and you could have just given him just the power and everything will be fine now there is a a blonde hair Stark running around if no one think of him either some kind of bastard or something like that it will be crazy sorry but you have to think before you actually design your characters looks like there is no explanation for his blonde hair at all and that's just bothers me the only Starks that doesn't look like Starks come from neds lineage and then you can explain there looks by saying it comes from their mother who is a tully but here you cannot explain it in any way it doesn't make sense for me

I'm sorry there is grammar and spelling mistakes but you get what I mean

will tell you the truth I didn't like how the breakup was done because a real break up is not going to go this way especially between teenagers one of the two will do something so stupid in irrational that will flabbergast you her not doing anything it's just weird especially when she is in this specific circumstances because both of their families are so close she will try to take the least damage from this breakup I mean from my experience she will try to put the blame on you somehow like saying you neglected her or you are the one who actually cheated on her or something like that to her parents and his parents I mean she's not that mature enough to actually handle this breakup without doing something stupid and if he actually was concerned about his family and her mother he should probably tell his family why he did he break up with her because he cannot be sure what she will try to say to save some face maybe she will try to blame him in some way and damage your relationship with his family but he didn't think about that I don't think you have that much relationship experience let's say most of breakups end up like this but for God's sake of teenagers they are emotional and irrational

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this story is all over the place I can't understand anything I mean is the MC actually know the Plot or he just remembers some things of the plot because someone who remembers the plot of the serious will not associate himself with the targaryens because like all of them end up crazy as f*** and many things in this story are not explained properly so we don't know how powerful house Baretheon is and if his house is actually strong enough to interfere Targaryen politics right now

I hear you but what I'm trying to say is if she's suspicious about like that you know about her being faithful if they got married why doesn't he just marry a woman like Catelyn Stark I I mean she is very faithful woman and she's so religious that's she will not allow herself to even think about that as she will not be faithful or give birth to a bastard as she sees it as tha greatest sin