Billy_Bunn_5040

screw you man for making me cry! but truth be told it's beautifully written.

Creationism does not deny scientific evidence, rather scientific evidence is the how too of creation. God did the work, science simply tells us how.

wrong church my friend, only the RFLDS currently practice polygamy. The Church of Jesus Christ of Latterday Saints has not practiced polygamy since president wilford woodruff.

depends on your point of view. But more of an anti-hero who isn't afraid to do what he feels needs to be done.

As a member of the said church I can tell you that is not true. the world was never built in proximity to Kolob then moved. it was built on location out of existing matter that was present in the area. The length of time of construction is correct though.

It was meant to be more of an emotional response, his scars from his parents run deep so the comments made triggered his memories of them, causing him to momentarily lose his cool. Thank you for the feedback though, and I hope you stick with it as the hero trope is not really what I’m going for.

Thank you so much, the last one is pretty much what I had in mind so good job with that.

Thank you so much for the review, and I am looking into the cover situation. If you would be kind enough to generate one so I can see it, I would be very thankful. I’m looking for something that goes well with the title but I’m not entirely sure what that is. Thank you again and I hope to hear from you soon.

Shameless author here, I am very excited to be writing this book. I Hope all of you that read it will enjoy it as well. Please remember that I am a new author, so please forgive any mistakes I make. This book will be very long running, the plot will develop naturally and may go to some unexpected places. I take all comments and reviews seriously, so if you want to see, understand, or change something leave it in the comments and I will get back with you on it. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoy the journey.