Really good story. Good world building. Has good potential. Concept is very Interesting and grabs the reader.
There is room for improvement and expecting more in the future.
This is those kind of plots that I enjoy. I guess I'll have a lots of expectations on this one. I love how the author has added a horror theme to the usual cliche. hope that it turns out to be good.
Just read through two chapters and I am really excited to know about the next ones. I think the main characters have not in action yet as they seem to be kids now. Hope there will be better character development throughout the novel.