The_Eldritch_Troll
Remember when I drove my 1996 Ford F150 through that group of 37 small nigerian children in 2003 at Jacksonville fun town. They never found the truck i used due to me burning it with 37.5 liters of us
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The_Eldritch_Troll23 days agoRespondeu a Jorah26252Ya but she is an OC and that makes it so we don’t really know her. You can’t just start a romance before even knowing the character without it feeling forced
- The_Eldritch_Trolla month agoComentou
Do this but don’t make him strong. He still needs to be a brat throwing a tantrum.
- The_Eldritch_Trolla month agoComentou
Why have updates slowed so much?
- The_Eldritch_Trolla month agoComentou
I’m gonna be completely honest, the best fics are the ones where the mc has a strong and unexplored backstory before transmigration. The ones were they aren’t that impressed by the system and just see it as a tool.
- The_Eldritch_Trolla month agoComentou
I’m fine with it as long as you don’t bring up his penis
- The_Eldritch_Troll2 months agoComentou
We got the 5 reviews now as well
- The_Eldritch_Troll2 months agoComentou
We only need one more review for 5 chapters
- The_Eldritch_Troll2 months agoPostado
Good read. Give more bonus chapters.
- The_Eldritch_Troll2 months agoComentou
It feels like you are stretching this as far as you can. It shouldn’t take this long to get to the main plot
- The_Eldritch_Troll2 months agoRespondeu a PuddingLord
I wouldn’t try anything too uncommon. You just need to make sure that their is enough established lore to work with.
