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I am an amateur writer and I write for entertainment only. I'm not particularly good at my writing skills but I will do my best.
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Well, Orsted went through various time loops, so he definitely knew Sylphiette.
Well, I haven't thought of that, so whoopsies I guess.
Well, you could say he isn't fully able to master Battle aura, just enough to swing a sword. After all, he is not just a normal human being.
That seems to be the case
I wanted to add a scene where Paul brings a boulder or two to their house to teach Dante. However, it will just increase the word count and I wasn't in the mood to explain at that time.
Even so, that's his dream
I don't get it. He just apologized and told his reason why he was tapping his feet. Where's the "treating like an employee" in there? If you're such an expert in criticizing my work, why don't you demonstrate to me how it's done.