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TempestNotion

TempestNotion

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I am an amateur writer and I write for entertainment only. I'm not particularly good at my writing skills but I will do my best.

2022-08-31 UnidoPhilippines
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  • TempestNotion
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    Respondeu a SEEKER

    just like he said "I want to be a hero... one who saves EVERYONE from harm."

    Ch 11 An Audience with the Armored Dragon King
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    Respondeu a SEEKER

    Nah, I don't think so. He will be stubborn about it till a certain turning point happens and hit him like a truck. Though it will make him realize the mistake of his mindset, he will still try but better.

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    Respondeu a SEEKER

    What do you mean?

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    Respondeu a Coldman

    Well, Orsted went through various time loops, so he definitely knew Sylphiette.

    Orsted nodded thoughtfully, seeming to accept my explanation. "Interesting, I didn't expect someone like her to teach magic," he murmured to himself.
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    Respondeu a Dragon_Rage93

    Well, I haven't thought of that, so whoopsies I guess.

    Answering the question, my father explained that Fighting Spirit was a technique used to amplify the physical capabilities of the individual to the extreme level. He then guided me in harnessing my own Fighting Spirit, which surged through me like a tingling wave of energy.
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    Respondeu a Dragon_Rage93

    Well, you could say he isn't fully able to master Battle aura, just enough to swing a sword. After all, he is not just a normal human being.

    Answering the question, my father explained that Fighting Spirit was a technique used to amplify the physical capabilities of the individual to the extreme level. He then guided me in harnessing my own Fighting Spirit, which surged through me like a tingling wave of energy.
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    Respondeu a Awcher

    That seems to be the case

    Orsted paused, his gaze shifting momentarily as if carefully considering his words. "There is a member of the Dragon Tribe who resides in a huge fortress hovering in the sky. His name is Perugius Dola, and he is said to possess knowledge of all significant magical occurrences in this world. If anyone knows about the mana disruption, it would be him."
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    Respondeu a Swone56

    I wanted to add a scene where Paul brings a boulder or two to their house to teach Dante. However, it will just increase the word count and I wasn't in the mood to explain at that time.

    "See that boulder over there? Watch me closely. You'll take a strong forward step with one leg, and then swing your sword!"
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    Respondeu a Yugi_Yugi

    Let's say he met someone overpowered

    Ch 6 The Bright Light that Darkened the World
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    Respondeu a black_goku_amv

    It's better than a 10-year-old older brother

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    Respondeu a Cutejohn1234

    what?

    Ch 5 Practicing Magic Even Failure Comes
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    Respondeu a THE_GreatRed

    Even so, that's his dream

    "I want to be a hero... one who will save everyone from harm."
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    Respondeu a black_goku_amv

    Well, let's just say he is built differently. Nornally, a boy of his age can't do it, but he can. I know, like he is a blessed child just like Zanoba.

    Ch 4 Learning the Art of the Blade
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    Respondeu a black_goku_amv

    Well, turning point is coming sooner than we think. So, I decided to speed up the process.

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    Respondeu a Blast_Niro

    Define what's normal to you. Is my dialogue too advanced for your "Human" mind can comprehend? Just because I chose the finest vocabulary, doesn't mean it is considered robotic.

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    Respondeu a Hikimarim

    I don't get it. He just apologized and told his reason why he was tapping his feet. Where's the "treating like an employee" in there? If you're such an expert in criticizing my work, why don't you demonstrate to me how it's done.

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    Respondeu a Blast_Niro

    So, you want it to sound like slang and informal, is that right?

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    Respondeu a Blast_Niro

    I did what I could to make it sound human, and it wasn't enough

    Ch 2 Fleeting Moments and Lost Opportunities
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    Respondeu a Blast_Niro

    so you want more "Umm" and "Ah" to the dialogue. Was it not enough?

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    Respondeu a TempestNotion

    Also, I read the novel. Her dialogues in there are also formal.

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