Kakarot_666

could you continue it or write some other fan fic fic of BTTH

hey man just don't over do it like this line that you writen for story plot "difies the very fabric of future" these lines are very cheesy. try to be natural you can see and take inspiration from the original novel and a fanfic on webnovel app call BTTH: from genius to invincible .. those are the type of writing style that suit BTTH. well all the best

and make mc more mature as he is person from the future with ready to use life experience so there is no need to make him learn something at every moment emotionaly

hey I think you should realy give it shot just change the cover and slightly increase writing style that's it. there is novel name Btth : genius to invincible which is very popular on webnovel you can also start patreon account for extra money

what the fuck are you doing author? even in the original story nalan yanran was not that powerfull after exiting the life and death whatever realm you are just making mc look retard who had come with confidence and now sustain several injuries while having same cultivation as his enemy fuck you

romance is annoying in this novel if it's gonna be like this for the rest of the novel then I am out I will see for more 30 chapters how it's goes once again it annoying and feels like mc is a bitch or super simp bitch

at least upload one chapter a week or so.. or complete the novel on a fast pace

try to upload at least one time a every week

hahaha..😅 sorry there are some spelling mistakes in above comment as I was typing without even re-reading my comment but i think it's understandable at least

hey nice job it's a great novel.. I had found and read it from some other website and after reading around 90+ chapters I must say it's one of the best fan fic of BTTH well at least not like some other novels where some other character then Xiao yan becames protaganists and mess things up it's doesn't not look good to me as I and we are used to see xiao on donghua and in novels as the MC. and I would like to make a suggestion If you don't mind.. how about doing a another fan fic of BTTH after you are done with your current running novels or have some free time like the story or plot can be like that the real BTTH same but with some changes as we know that xiao yan in the original novel is a transmigrated person from Blue planet(earth) so like xiao yan being with system or being a little OP from the start like one or two levels higher cultivation for every arc of original novel and fast cultivation speed and more combat power as we that after reaching dao zun xiao can't fight more then two or three levels higher and it became even harder at dao sheng to even fight one level higher bur you can adjust your fanfic so that xiao yan can have more high combat power and even at Dao di he should be able to fight 5-6 dou di warriors like hun tiandi so even at dou di(Soveriegn) his combat power should be lot closer to earth soveriegn in great thousand world. well I think not anyone had done it and I had seen 2 novels somewhat similar to it but at MTL with horrible translation but I still read them whole so I think the novel with this plot can even get more views and higher ranking in webnovel then your current BTTH fanfics. well anyway good job man😊