Deonstra

man I know, I'm just read the words "I don't have enough energy" and get ptsd, would not even wrote the comment about this if the hole chapter didn't involve the "lack of energy" type excuse

I understand that he doesn't want to kill her but I was not talking about that. I was simply fascinated that punching and kicking an "super"human in the stomach with the strength he has didn't even make her freeze up, since he knows where to strike it should have at least paralyzed her for a second because that is a simple human reaction

guy literally had every enhancement on during this battle against an "trained" killer with an sniper quirk, why the hell didn't this one shot her she literally doesn't have any enhancements

Why the hell did you ad another transmigrator, it was going so well with the slice of life feel the fic had and you just go and ruin it

Well you took your time but you made it back to this story so again thank you for the chapter again

When a guy discoveres a parental figure

honestly, it would have been better for your fic to post those chapters separately because it would make your chapter count bigger and with that more people would be reading it

I must admit that I love the story and it is a very nice breath of fresh air on this app. The way you are going with the village is nice and I hope that he will start learning fuinjutsu soon

I don't know what to say, the way you wrote your characters was good, jokes were funny and everything was fine until you started nerfing Mc so you can keep the cannon storyline hole after 5 min of fighting he didn't have any more haki are you joking, and that wasn't even the worst thing the worst thing is that you know how strong he is and how his abilities work and you still made this abomination of a fight

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