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KRPL1dComentoushe already had* Or so i think.
Although he had already had sex with her brother, and although she knew what would happen next, Qing Hong still couldn't help but let out a shy moan.- KRPL1dComentou
I think ot will be beyter if you focus on the Mc’s name. Sometimes you bring it as “Yechen”, it’s better to be “Ye Chen”, more comfortable and smoother in the sentence.
Yechen looked at his sister's intoxicated look with her almond-shaped eyes slightly closed and her rapid breathing, sniffing her sweet body fragrance. - KRPL1dComentouCh 18 Elder sister2*
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Bit of both is good, and i think you could work some more on the smut chapters and story progression. Let it be more solid.
Any thoughts regarding this novel—want it pure smut or world-building? (Let me know in the comments.). - KRPL1dComentouCh 10 Qinghong 2*
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The legendary inverted nip*les!!
Ye Chen exclaimed in his mind he hit the jackpot with the legendary inverted nipple and starts to suck like a child - KRPL1dComentou
😂🤣😂🤣
"He is the one elder sister," says the little girl with a ferocious smile while licking the dagger with her lips. (She may try to look menacing but it looks cute) - KRPL1dComentouCh 2 The Bandits
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Small details are for you to do, since it's your novel, but me i, personally, don't like yuri, yaoi or things alike. I prefer the heroines being devoted to the MC alone and don't have intimacy high level of skinship and so. I like when the MC's women just think and have eyes for him alone, and being intimate with just him. I won't say just virgins, NTR(netori to be spicefic) milfs, even incest. I don't mind any of those as long as the things above are there. "and sorry for bullshiting too much"
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- KRPL10dComentouCh 113 I Can Help
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Blowy
Realizing that her little help might not be very effective and might even backfire, she hesitated for a moment and then pulled back a bit, and then like a fish resurfacing for air, swiftly ducked under the covers. - KRPL10dComentou
Confirm*
As for Otome, Sasaki also didn't want to comfirm his relationship with someone else until she approved. - KRPL10dComentou
An* impulsive
Afterall, she was indeed on impulsive girl. - KRPL10dComentou
I would love such interactions with other girls too.
Looking at his face and seeing that he was really not angry, the girl, suddenly in good mood, chuckled and tightened her arms around his neck, burying her head back into his chest again. - KRPL10dComentou
Doted on her* the most
Although she didn't really believe that, Brother Fuyumi, who usually doted on the the most would hit her, the shadow Okino Kazuki left on her that night was too deep an impression for her not to be scared. - KRPL10dComentou
Another way to not sat a scum
If he had been a man of singular devotion, that might have been one thing, but he wasn't.