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ZeroKip

ZeroKip

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Hey, I'm a newcomer, so don't expect daily updates or whatever, expects like a chapter every 2 days, critics are welcome and required for me for my writing skills, of course I do this bc I like it.

2022-07-20 UnidoFrance
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  • ZeroKip
    ZeroKip2 years ago
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    [REVIEW SWAP] I'll be honest, it is incredibly well written but some aspects feel very confusing, for example i didnt understand when the book talked about amore briar death and just completely cuts to a girl facing her mother destroying her family photos and not long after trying to commit suicide and the daughter tryna stop the mother? And then like 3 chapters after that we learn that the girl is actually amore briar and an assassin was sent by her father to kill both of them? Quite confusing if i must say, but other than that, the book is actually good! I am not a big fan of this genre but the description and detailing of the character and their faces are absolutely high tier quality work compared to me! So in conclusion, confusing at times, but interesting stories and amazingly well written. (Well compared to me at least)

  • ZeroKip
    ZeroKip2 years ago
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    Ight im only 1 chapter in and ive got to say something, the translation/english has got to be reworked, there is deepl y'know?Anyways, the story seems like a classic dungeon type where the mc is really weak at first but gets op on like a random dungeon which is mis calculated or sum.