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I just finished reading the first chapter of this book and I gotta say, it's pretty interesting. It really grabs your attention right from the start. The only thing I think could use some improvement is the descriptions, especially when it comes to the world around the two main characters. And maybe a bit more action would spice things up even more. But other than that, I think this book has some serious potential.

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This story has potential, but it could benefit from better paragraphing and dialogue. The writer should focus on showing rather than telling, as there is too much information in one chapter. However, overall it is an interesting story, especially for fans of fantasy books. Keep up the good work!

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So happy you like it, new chapter tomorrow

This intro is amazing, it's rich world filled with mystery and great story telling. Keep writing this beautiful story.