1stZenitsu_Zoldyck

Hmph, mere author, thinking you can make us choose.

Bro, he can't even beat the admirals yet. Aren't the yonko stronger than that?

The MC is a member of the Zoldycks branch family, which I guess the author made up cause I don't remember hearing about the Zoldycks having a branch family in the anime. The author actually creates a lot of new dynamics within the HxH world that were never mentioned in the anime, and I guess that might be entertaining for some people, but I don't quite like it. The MCs Hatsu is creating nen beasts by "observing" specific locations in the HxH world. For example, when he observed heavens arena for about two months, he created Baki Hanma. So far, his nen beasts include Killer queen, Baki, lampent, Natsu Dragneel, and 2 more from obscure anime's I've never even heard of. Every time he makes a new nen beast, his own nen pool increases for some reason that I don't understand. With his current 6 beasts, he's already at the top of B rank nen users, and he's only 11 years old. For relevance, according to the story, most phantom troop members are rank B nen users, Chrollo and Silva are rank A nen users and Netoro and Maha are rank S nen users. I suspect he'll surpass Silva by the time he's 12 years old 😑 This is way too fast, in my opinion, especially since this MC doesn't have a single cheat besides his knowledge of the plot, which he doesn't even take advantage of. It doesn't make sense to me how he's so strong, even if he was raised by Maha Zoldyck. The MC is also raising his own team of nen users, as all Zoldyck do in this story, though their relevance to the story is almost zero. Their only use is to write about the plots from other anime. For example, his first team member is a little girl named Nina, her father is heavens arena competitor whose dream is to become a floor master, in order to do this he first turns his wife into a nen puppet/chimera, when this is not enough he decides to do the same to his daughter, fusing her with her pet dog and turning her into a half human half dog chimera 😑, she even has the same line as the Nina from Full Metal Alchemist when the MC discovers her in that state, you know that "Big bro, let's play" or something along those lines. The other girls include Shizuku from the phantom troop and 2 others that probably reference anime I'm not aware of. Honestly, half of the reason I'm even reading this story is just to kill time while I wait for other fanfiction I'm currently reading to drop their daily chapter.😅

Well, I find the story entertaining. The MC is a bit overpowered, but that's part of the course for most self insert fanfics, especially ones involving a system. The only thing I don't like is that the MC is one of those dense protagonists, though not to an extreme degree. Also, he's a bit too serious sometimes, though I guess not everyone can be as chill as Luffy 😅.

Now, even I'm waiting to hear his "apology"

Kūkan Mukai

I bet his next nen beast will have a Sharingan.