KingPablo

Simply beautiful. Love the way you write fam. This is just, really good. I'm looking forward to Kael's growth as the story goes on. Definitely worth reading.

This is my best paragraph

Be looking good so far. If you love greek mythology this is definitely for you. As one familiar with the myth, this story is interesting. Love the way the writer writes as well. Simple to follow and read. Kudos bruv.

Damn, a strong chapter

Sure brother. Keep at it, you can only get better. For real.

The story is okay. There is a sense of sibling rivalry that can be built on from the few chapters I've read. The best parts for me are how you describe their use of magic, I liked that a lot. But the writing quality needs work for real. The punctuations are not good at all. There is potential but with its current style it could be hard to read.

We need full stop my man.

I don't want to be a shadow but not drowning is a plus to me

This is dope. As someone who isn't immersed in romantic books I ended up wanting to see more of this teenage love play out. Strange way to lose virginity but understandable and mixed with the emotions it is very real. Use of prose is on point with only room to grow, no downsides about the writing style. The plot is simple and yet capturing, I just love it. Thanks author for this, keep going fam.

I smell a setup coming up.