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The story is very engaging, with an captivating plot. The initial chapter had me hooked from the start. Other than the long paragraphs, it is a very good story. I hope to read more."
Like the story, the writing quality is excellent the pace of the story and the plot Is interesting but the overly possessive behaviour and the toxicity and rage of Paul was little much But I am sure it's part of the character development hope in the end they have a healthy relationship
I am uploading this book to another account with the hope of uploading all the chapters this month and catching up. I have edited the initial chapter to make it more readable, while also making changes to the settings and some dialogue. I appreciate the time and effort you have put into reading this. I know I am a newbie and not very skilled, so it's hard to avoid making some mistakes. However, I assure you that the newly edited chapters are better than this one. They are more refined. I hope you can show your support, and lastly, thank you millions for your assistance.