sir have you forgotten you have a novel yourself 😭 please start posting already.... i have been blue balled and i dont even have balls...please start uploading already

goblin slayer would like to know your location.

phew..... thank god he was killed. if the author had made princess believe him i would have issued an assassination on the dark web for the author. grandpa drax save this moron.

author what happened to you? r u alright? or is it just you were high when u wrote this? ltrly i mean like ltrly cant u think of anything more creative?

dude both of them are s*x offenders 💀 shakuni was the main reason behind the stripping of draupadi in the royal court(yes people and her husbands watched as a woman was being stripped. i found everyone except krishna disgusting after this event. krishna was the one who saved her) and ravan ltrly almost r@ped a married woman. both of them are just degenerates...

*internet era

ykw their obsession with family is a little concerning 😅. i sure hope its just clingy behavior.

i have no bad things to say about this. As a lesbian i enjoyed the character. I never knew the struggles of fat people, i just thought they were overly dramatic with their ''world hates me'' act. but the author portrayed mc's struggle quite well. the mc isnt dependent on the system and uses his abilities quite creatively. the book has a very classy humor you will relate to and enjoy. The villainous aunt was very well designed. If i had to make requests it would be in the smut areas. While they are exciting they lack the length and that umami flavor if u catch my drift(cmon author san let that inner degenerate dish out some quality lemons). hope you improve there and dont drop this book. Overall 10stars. best of luck for future chapters author san

bro system be crackin 😂

bro whats with the friendly fire😂 dude got dissed by the system twice in a single chapter

but he is an absolute douche bag

this book is very racist. the author seems very insecure and likes to project it onto his stories. not only that but the misogyny in this book is beyond belief. not worth the read. this guy is classic of fat virgin edgelord taking out his frustrations on women and world in his books. i read his previous books bcuz i genuinely thought it was a good history genre book which is rare on webnovel but ohmigod, that novel is borderline representation of n@zi desires. 0 stars if this guy lived in germany i m pretty sure he would have gotten in trouble with police

look who's talking 🙄🙄

AYO

elyon is deleting any reviews that points accurate criticism and is below three stars.. u can go see all the reviews. you wont find reviews that are openly criticizing the book or have given a low rating. thats really shameful elyon

i dunno whats the problem here is, but many reviews are being deleted. do you know how or why this happening elyon. even my own review isnt showing up. i made sure to not use inapporpriate language but it still doesnt show up. plsss answer

so here's a detailed review lets take some points in consideration 1. writing quality and grammar- if you know elyon, you know that this two are never going to be a prblm in his books, top tier 2. World background - its very wide world and elyon skillfully unravels it to us as the time goes by and we can truly enjoy rather than just another info dump. so yeah full points here, trust me this is the best thing about this book 3 Lore- very very rich, i love it and you will too. thats all i can say without spoiling it. 4.characters- now this is where prblms start to rear their ugly head. in short characters are too plain. We didnt know anything about iris and she just loved MC from chp1. Cai was better. The thing is we cant connect with the characters and they just seem like characters in a novel, not real people. for example take Amanda stern from The author's pov, you see her as more of an alive being rather than just a character. you can tell her likes and dislikes, her action patterns and her quirks. whereas most characters in this novel act according to plot(both evil and good). so yeah if author san is reading this, plss take this into account as well. 5.update stability- this man once wrote for two years without any breaks, yeas for 600 days, so unless he got isekai'd into his own book you dont have to worry about not getting you daily dose of dopamine. I hope my review helped both the author and the readers. I tried to show both good and bad points as everything has its own good and bad sides. If you do not agree to my opinions then we can both agree to disagree. that is all, have a good day

how childish. mc takes one L and you are crying already. cant even handle one setback

btw i just wanted to say that u r a great guy to at least try to understand the other person's opinion rather than just lashing out. Its funny how basic manners have become a rarity these days. but yeah thanks for giving point of view a chance

well you are not wrong to think that, as it was a series of moments that culminated. one such example would be his son's death. they were too conceited even tho they knew he hadnt mastered his techniques yet and just bet on the fact that kauravas will play fair. resulting in abhimanyu's death. as i said even this guy's won the war, the victory was hollow and their hearts empty. ofc u could say that this didnt lead to his ''direct'' downfall as he lived a long life but IMO arjuna was one of the characters who lost the most, his sons, his teachers and his brother. but yeah the author should have phrased it better. PAY ATTENTION HIKARU