Ryan_Av

Why is the title "Jessica" if her name is Helena? I agree with the other reviewer, this is very cringe. Their interaction is terrible. Those conversations don't happen in real life. The author needs more interaction with women.

I think the author meant lightning. Thunder is the sound after lightning. It should be a combination of water and air. Not fire and air. Since lightning is formed when ice crystals collide with each other. Other than that, story is cool so far.

It was boring. All the protagonist did was cultivate. Nothing was happening. One chapter, he cultivates and goes to the next level. Next chapter, same thing. Next chapter, same thing. He cultivates and levels up. Nothing was happening. We don't even know how strong he is because he doesn't use it. He just cultivates and levels up. The author is saying he is getting stronger. He is a lot stronger now. This chapter, he is even stronger than before.

Overall the story is good except for the fact that the author made the age of the characters be 6 years old. If you Google it, most children learn to read at 6. However, for some reason, the author made these 6 years old able to hunt demons, have complex emotions and thoughts, a 6 year old girl went down the mountain by herself, tried solving her clans financial problems, and these 6 years old children are building muscles that are strong enough to wield swords and slice people in half which is ridiculous. The protagonist is also plotting revenge against 6 year old kids which is so petty. Imagine an adult trying to get revenge on children which is ridiculous.

Protagonist is plotting revenge against a 7 year old girl? How old are his siblings? 7-10? They are just children and protagonist wants to kill them? So petty. He shouldn't be mad at the children since they are just children. He should be mad at the parents.

The age of the characters make no sense. They are 6 years old? Lucia went down the mountain to sell artifacts because her clan has financial problems? She did this while being 6 years old? She is 6!!! Children that age believe they can be superman if you tell them. She is worrying about finance and money at 6? The protagonist can do it since he was previously an adult but Lucia doing it makes no sense. They are hunting demons at 6 years old also since they are going to a hunting festival? Make it believable like 10 or 13. Most children's height at that age don't even reach my hips and they are hunting demons?