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why not feel anger at your mom and watch man for allowing you to be born?
subtle
This feels like it is going on too fast. Why is the exposition only delivered through a dialogue? Also, it is difficult to keep track of things that are going on and it feels like you are skipping important details about crucial topics. The non-alignment and aid by both sides alone deserve a couple of chapters. politicians are lazy and there is no way events happen this fast.
un was barely established at this point
All in a few hours? You need to work on your time scaling and stake escalation Clautic
the weaponry India had at that time was quite good really. Sure, the logistics capacity was shit, but with all the disarmament going on, the royal Indian forces were equipped with top of the line ww2 era setups .
Parchment. Parchment. What century is this? 12th?
you are the one who is wierd
oh my.