Savage_Death

The story is slow-paced and there are some mistakes here and there but overall, The plot is quite fascinating. The MC is not your average childish or righteous but is quite smart and adaptable to his situation. The side characters are also well-written. The mysteries surrounding the world make it more interesting. The battle scenes are average but could be improved. In my opinion, If the Author doesn't mess up too much, It has the potential to become a gem. Good Luck