RaiseHavoc

At the very end of closing chapters, it’s time and spirits. Examples around the saying of (they were running out of time) or (may the spirits have mercy because their enemy would show none) they are sprinkled throughout the novel. Does it take away from your work? To me, no. Just something i noticed

These ending chapters have a repetitive pattern..

F that! Keep your pace, Hex. I was messing around but I’m sure there’s energy vampires lurking around.. just know you have people who appreciate the quality work and effort you put in. Time is on your side as well as the majority of your readers [img=recommend]

Make it 3000 words and see what happens

I miss Smiling San Sheng [img=angry][img=update]