SeniorTrouble

By the way, I have an idea for a fanfic: "Charlie Weasley's Rebirth in the GoT/ASOIAF Universe", I think it's quite promising, maybe someone will write it?

I don't know who MC is, but the plot is just wonderful. I wish he would meet the canon characters, father, mother, I would like to see the reaction of Varys, Baelish, Stanis, Robert, Ned, MC's mother after chapter 12!

Damn, this is all so dry and boring... It's like I'm reading a novel about cultivation... What's his reason for teaching anyone anything?! Why can't he study and become stronger on his own behind the scenes? Why should he teach fools and waste his time on it instead of sleeping or resting!?

MC's actions in the rebellion are too cautious. During the rebellion, he could: 1. Kill Varys, Baelish, Pycelle. 2. Kill Viserys and Capture Daenerys and raise her himself as a bride for his future body. 3. Look for dragon eggs. 4. Burn King's Landing in Wildfire with the Lannister soldiers. And many other things that I have already forgotten, but the author simply decided to preserve the canonical timeline in order to think less independently about the overall plot and sometimes make edits to the overall plot, adding MC and his minor influence on the canon.

Okay, I'm willing to forgive Mc's stupidity in the first chapter. This chapter was acceptable!)

Um, I didn't see a word about super soldier serums, metagenes, x-genes, inhuman genes, maybe Kree experiments, experiments with Celestial genes, etc. in this chapter. What kind of MC knows all the twists and turns, focusing only on trash suits!? There's magic! Radioactive spiders! Did he even try to collect the stones before Thanos!? And don't justify everything to TVA!

Everything seems to be going well, but it also seems to be going badly... For a 100 year old man, Harry is too careless! He changes the timeline too much! I understand the death of enemies and the salvation of allies! BUT! In the original, Dumbledore died and now Harry does nothing about it, he wants to change his future and keep him alive!? The most powerful WHITE wizard who can become Harry's enemy at any moment and pose a threat to his family!? Or is Harry so stupid and careless that he thinks he can kill him with his own hands at any moment? Also, there is Cedric Diggory! He must die as per canon! Otherwise, who knows if he will take Neville's place or something like that?

I understand that the author did this in order to introduce into the plot the vampire serum, the vampires themselves and the possibility for the MC to get this serum, creating obstacles/barriers/villains for the MC to advance the plot, but the author did it very clumsily, stupidly and uninterestingly.

How uninteresting it is to read battle scenes when they are completely useless and would not be needed if the MC (mirror image of the author) was not stupid!