KnifeEarEnthusiast

Like someone else mentioned already, Hiruzen is basically your only relevant side character. He's the character Fujin has interacted with the most and with whom he has the deepest bond. You'll now have to build something similar back up, or Fujin will just turn into this 2 dimensional grind machine (something he already suffers quite a bit of).

Also, Hiruzen sealing Orochimaru wouldn't end the Edo Tensei, just his control over the First and Second Hokage, and that's if Hiruzen fully seals him and not just his arms again.

Pretty fun idea, but there's very little attention to detail. 50m range on a coin that can pass through 10 people? He can control electricity well enough to form a pikachu shape, but can't shoot a lightning bolt forward? He can speed up other people but doesn't do that whenever there's trouble? Gloves are enough to block an AOE discharge of 500,000V? Shigaraki wears gloves? Also, the references to Naruto, while fun, are distracting. Write a fic where Kakashi becomes to Raikage if that's what you want. Good luck!

So... Todoroki should be dead? You could've just said he coated himself in ice, which you already established is not conductive. Gloves protect Shigaraki from an AOE attack? What? Even if they did... they block his quirk. Could he even wear gloves? Wouldn't they just decay away? Also, gloves themselves have limits on how many volts they can protect you from. Half a million Volts would probably melt right through. Shigaraki was a threat to someone with superhuman speed and reflexes that can shoot bullets from a distance? Why can Shigaraki dodge bullets? He doesn't have any extra quirks yet, as far as we know. *Sigh* well... I guess I'm done with this novel

Boys, it's time Let's put a ring on Azula's finger FBI: Isn't she 14?🤨

Wasn't Yuto a reincarnation? He knows how humans wage war and commit genocides without needing chakra He knows about upcoming threats like the Otsutsuki, which, even if you don't take Boruto as canon, are still a threat, as proved by Kaguya existing. Also, since when does Yuto care about peace? Why would he keep tempting fate to kill him at this point? Just finish your plan to merge with the clones and become a god, then breed Tsunade. I thought that was the game plan here?

Yeah, it's really easy to beat Nagato. you just need the 9 tails, or the flying raijin, or a space time mangekyou. All of these are notoriously easy to get afterall

what's this? a heart to heart conversation? a talk no jutsu, even? from Naruto? it can't be. Boruto's dad would never do that

"sales and marketing strategies were..." What's with this gpt written nonsense? Why are you making the MC a business mogul now? when did he have time to do this in between his training sessions to reach quasi kage at 13 or whatever? Get on with the plot already. You're 50 chapters in, and you've not done anything but expand on Hyuga organisation a bit.