nice,this is how I would do it too..maybe more painful then this one who knows..this is just satisfaction
Later after the couple were losing their conscious I healed them enought to make them awake and take all the pain from their bone being consumed till their heads remain they were alive and later died.
Everything especially the update stability is good except the world back ground which is too plain.
More info needed to imagine more of the the scene and more character development as well there is a nice plot about after each 3 chapter which is quite good as well
Yes,I think the novel need about of a recheck the novel itself has potential but the way you convey it makes the difference so I want the author to be more careful
But this girl would not believe me and said,Just keep your nonsense to yourself,If you don't want to say about it then I will not ask you..sight..what is wrong with her,why must I answer all her question for her If she would not believe it and would told me to keep it to myself which I was obviously doing in the beginning.
this was actually a very good thing as well for me and the whole kingdom as If there had actually attacked me,They would only end up the only way possible for them,If that happen then,there would be a huge amount of decreasing number of an S ranker in the whole kingdom.
They came rushing all the way here,Which even include some strong S rank warrior and mage as well,After seeing me at the center of the crater,some of the reckless and thoughtless ranker though it was my doing and burst out to attack me.